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[@saby](/forums/art/topics/artists-group-chat?post_id=5152348#post_5152348)
You're welcome.

Yeah, only *some* depth. It's easier for me to explain writing things because I can just type up a new sentence to show what I mean. Art? Well, I'd need to redraw (part of) the thing myself and find somewhere to upload it temporarily. So I can only explain with words, and I'm not really good at explaining myself... or at least at making it short and to the point.

So, about the shoulder.

I can only eyeball it since there's the wing in the way, but I'm picturing the curve of her body underneath and I **feel** the shoulder joint should be closer to the wing's. Both a little more to the right and a little higher.

The *big* problem I see with the shoulder though, is that your mare is all curves... and I really mean *all curves*, even the tail bow's corners are a little smoothed over. But then there's this sharp, hard angle that looks like it's been done with a set square sticking out of her chest. It's basically two straight lines meeting together.

Only thing left I can think about is her ponytail. Is it supposed to be on the *left* side of the back of her head, like a singular pigtail? Because if it's supposed to be in the middle, I feel it doesn't look that way. Of course, I may be wrong, and maybe you don't want even more work on this.

Though looking at it, I think it'd be a 'simple' matter of putting the (top of the) ponytail behind the rest of the hair. Don't know if you used layers on this though.

As far as *highlights* go... I suck at light and shadow, so I can only eyeball it at 'everything save the wings (as mentioned earlier) looks good to me.'

And obviously, all of this is my subjective, not-really-educated-in-arts opinion. Hence all the "I feel" and all. I may be wrong.

Finally, save for those little bits, the picture looks great.

%(Removed the part where I'm *pretty sure* I mixed you up with someone else in this thread.)%

[@saby](/forums/art/topics/artists-group-chat?post_id=5152348#post_5152348)
You're welcome.

Yeah, only *some* depth. It's easier for me to explain writing things because I can just type up a new sentence to show what I mean. Art? Well, I'd need to redraw (part of) the thing myself and find somewhere to upload it temporarily. So I can only explain with words, and I'm not really good at explaining myself... or at least at making it short and to the point.

So, about the shoulder.

I can only eyeball it since there's the wing in the way, but I'm picturing the curve of her body underneath and I **feel** the shoulder joint should be closer to the wing's. Both a little more to the right and a little higher.

The *big* problem I see with the shoulder though, is that your mare is all curves... and I really mean *all curves*, even the tail bow's corners are a little smoothed over. But then there's this sharp, hard angle that looks like it's been done with a set square sticking out of her chest. It's basically two straight lines meeting together.

Only thing left I can think about is her ponytail. Is it supposed to be on the *left* side of the back of her head, like a singular pigtail? Because if it's supposed to be in the middle, I feel it doesn't look that way. Of course, I may be wrong, and maybe you don't want even more work on this.

Though looking at it, I think it'd be a 'simple' matter of putting the (top of the) ponytail behind the rest of the hair. Don't know if you used layers on this though.

As far as *highlights* go... I suck at light and shadow, so I can only eyeball it at 'everything save the wings (as mentioned earlier) looks good to me.'

And obviously, all of this is my subjective, not-really-educated-in-arts opinion. Hence all the "I feel" and all. I may be wrong.

Finally, save for those little bits, the picture looks great. ~~If I r

(Recall right, ymou'ved not bheen drawing for long so I was surprised art seeing something so well-done and in-depth after I clicked your link.~~ I'm checked you*pr artist tag, you've been at it for years, forget the struck-throughe* part! I think I mixed you up with someone else in this thread.)

[@saby](/forums/art/topics/artists-group-chat?post_id=5152348#post_5152348)
You're welcome.

Yeah, only *some* depth. It's easier for me to explain writing things because I can just type up a new sentence to show what I mean. Art? Well, I'd need to redraw (part of) the thing myself and find somewhere to upload it temporarily. So I can only explain with words, and I'm not really good at explaining myself... or at least at making it short and to the point.

So, about the shoulder.

I can only eyeball it since there's the wing in the way, but I'm picturing the curve of her body underneath and I **feel** the shoulder joint should be closer to the wing's. Both a little more to the right and a little higher.

The *big* problem I see with the shoulder though, is that your mare is all curves... and I really mean *all curves*, even the tail bow's corners are a little smoothed over. But then there's this sharp, hard angle that looks like it's been done with a set square sticking out of her chest. It's basically two straight lines meeting together.

Only thing left I can think about is her ponytail. Is it supposed to be on the *left* side of the back of her head, like a singular pigtail? Because if it's supposed to be in the middle, I feel it doesn't look that way. Of course, I may be wrong, and maybe you don't want even more work on this.

Though looking at it, I think it'd be a 'simple' matter of putting the (top of the) ponytail behind the rest of the hair. Don't know if you used layers on this though.

As far as *highlights* go... I suck at light and shadow, so I can only eyeball it at 'everything save the wings (as mentioned earlier) looks good to me.'

And obviously, all of this is my subjective, not-really-educated-in-arts opinion. Hence all the "I feel" and all. I may be wrong.

Finally, save for those little bits, the picture looks great. ~~If I recall right, you've not been drawing for long so I was surprised at seeing something so well-done and in-depth after I clicked your link.~~ I checked your artist tag, you've been at it for years, forget the struck-through part! I think I mixed you up with someone else in this thread.

[@saby](/forums/art/topics/artists-group-chat?post_id=5152348#post_5152348)
You're welcome.

Yeah, only *some* depth. It's easier for me to explain writing things because I can just type up a new sentence to show what I mean. Art? Well, I'd need to redraw (part of) the thing myself and find somewhere to upload it temporarily. So I can only explain with words, and I'm not really good at explaining myself... or at least at making it short and to the point.

So, about the shoulder.

I can only eyeball it since there's the wing in the way, but I'm picturing the curve of her body underneath and I **feel** the shoulder joint should be closer to the wing's. Both a little more to the right and a little higher.

The *big* problem I see with the shoulder though, is that your mare is all curves... and I really mean *all curves*, even the tail bow's corners are a little smoothed over. But then there's this sharp, hard angle that looks like it's been done with a set square sticking out of her chest. It's basically two straight lines meeting together.

Only thing left I can think about is her ponytail. Is it supposed to be on the *left* side of the back of her head, like a singular pigtail? Because if it's supposed to be in the middle, I feel it doesn't look that way. Of course, I may be wrong, and maybe you don't want even more work on this.

Though looking at it, I think it'd be a 'simple' matter of putting the (top of the) ponytail behind the rest of the hair. Don't know if you used layers on this though.

As far as *highlights* go... I suck at light and shadow, so I can only eyeball it at 'everything save the wings (as mentioned earlier) looks good to me.'

And obviously, all of this is my subjective, not-really-educated-in-arts opinion. Hence all the "I feel" and all. I may be wrong.

Finally, save for those little bits, the picture looks great. ~~If I recall right, you've not been drawing for long so I was surprised at seeing something so well-done and in-depth after I clicked your link.~~ I checked your artist tag, you've been at it for years, forget the struck-through part! I think I mixed you up with someone else.

[@saby](/forums/art/topics/artists-group-chat?post_id=5152348#post_5152348)
You're welcome.

Yeah, only *some* depth. It's easier for me to explain writing things because I can just type up a new sentence to show what I mean. Art? Well, I'd need to redraw (part of) the thing myself and find somewhere to upload it temporarily. So I can only explain with words, and I'm not really good at explaining myself... or at least at making it short and to the point.

So, about the shoulder.

I can only eyeball it since there's the wing in the way, but I'm picturing the curve of her body underneath and I **feel** the shoulder joint should be closer to the wing's. Both a little more to the right and a little higher.

The *big* problem I see with the shoulder though, is that your mare is all curves... and I really mean *all curves*, even the tail bow's corners are a little smoothed over. But then there's this sharp, hard angle that looks like it's been done with a set square sticking out of her chest. It's basically two straight lines meeting together.

Only thing left I can think about is her ponytail. Is it supposed to be on the *left* side of the back of her head, like a singular pigtail? Because if it's supposed to be in the middle, I feel it doesn't look that way. Of course, I may be wrong, and maybe you don't want even more work on this.

Though looking at it, I think it'd be a 'simple' matter of putting the (top of the) ponytail behind the rest of the hair. Don't know if you used layers on this though.

As far as *highlights* go... I suck at light and shadow, so I can only eyeball it at 'everything save the wings (as mentioned earlier) looks good to me.'

And obviously, all of this is my subjective, not-really-educated-in-arts opinion. Hence all the "I feel" and all. I may be wrong.

Finally, save for those little bits, the picture looks great. ~~If I recall right, you've not been drawing for long so I was surprised at seeing something so well-done and in-depth after I clicked your link.~~ I checked your artist tag, you've been at it for years, forget the struck-through part!