If you’re basing Dash off of that soccer player, here are some tips. I’m not an artist but I can see these things:Her chin needs to be longer since you stopped too short and it needs to look more like an oval.Dash’s breasts need to be more pronounced in contrast to her torso. Or Dash’s torso needs to be less broad and look skinnier to make her have a more female physique.Dash’s right arm needs work. It needs to look like it’s going behind Rainbow’s torso because right now it makes her right arm look too small.The most important thing to ask is, how can I make Rainbow look more like that soccer player in that picture. I can see that this Rainbow has potential but you need to improve the proportions to bring out her more feminine figure even if your Rainbow Dash does have breasts and some curves already.I hope this helps.
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