(NSFW) Critique my Critique?

Wiinajamizzi
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Hi Derpibooru! It’s me, Wiinajamizzi/ Explonova. I hope you’re all doing well.
 
I’ve always been trying to get better at writing critiques and visual analyses. Here’s a recent example of a DeviantArt critique that I did for a friend (NSFW): http://fav.me/daufyy6
 
Any feedback/ criticism/ suggestions are welcome.
 
Thanks.
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@Blossomforth
 
Kay, I just was curious because I’m unfamiliar how Derpibooru staff and users react to critique.  
Also as far as I’ve seen, his DA critiques are quite fair and professional compared to others all-5-star-bestpicturever ones on DeviantArt.  
So, no trolling or offense just a plain curiosity on this matter.
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@Stooped_hooy  
We don’t give people duck badges for writing fair and valid critiques. Unless an artist specifically asks not to be critiqued (which is pretty rare), they’re very much welcome (and encouraged) here, both by the staff and the community.
 
But still, next time, if you’re legit curious, please ask via PM. The way you asked definitely could take this thread downhill quickly.
Wiinajamizzi
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What in the world just happened?
 
@Blossomforth  
I honestly thought that my last comment on >>1307041 that I wrote before being banned + comment removed was a legitimate critical analysis, and the staff member who took action literally said they didn’t even read my comment before removing it (reason= TL;DR).
 
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Critiques are most certainly not welcome here
 
I was planing to let it go and not write anymore critical analyses here, but I take issue with you in particular saying that my comment must not have been fair and valid to receive this duck badge, and I don’t recall the artist specifically stating that critiques weren’t welcome at the time.
 
You’re going to have to prove that the removed comment that granted me this duck badge wasn’t a fair and or valid critique if you’re publicly accusing me of writing unfair critiques. I think its a complete lie that critiques are very much welcome here as that has not been my experience at all. In fact, I don’t think i’ve ever seen an in-depth critique on derpibooru ever (besides my own). If you could show me a single critique anywhere on this site that was as in-depth as the one that was unfairly censored, I will be genuinely surprised and concede. Especially since the critique that was removed was almost as long and in-depth as the Deviant Art critique here.
 
You say Stooped_hooy’s comment could take this thread downhill but nobody had even commented here for it to go downhill in the first place. This is absurd and totally runs counter to your claim that critique and discussion are “very much welcome here”. I really don’t appreciate still being slandered well after an event has passed, whilst staff use their moderator privileges to censor differing opinions without even reading them properly. This place is too much of a censorship landmine to “welcome critiques”, i’m sorry.
 
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Proof on how in-depth my removed critique was, as acknowledged by a third party
 
both images are excerpt references to page #5 of this derpibooru image:
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@Wiinajamizzi  
You went into that thread full-cocked with “I like Applejack and all, but this is a shit image to feature, “How is it unique though? I’ve seen sonic recolours with more originality, and then made a huge scene after several users asked you to stop, and a mod explicitly told you “You keep going and you’re getting a time out, cause you clearly don’t intend to stop on your own”. By the time your critique came along you had long worn out your welcome there.
 
The moral of the story is when you’ve caused enough trouble that a mod has to step in and say “stop or you will be banned” and you decide not to stop, you really should expect to be banned and have your comment deleted.
Wiinajamizzi
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@The Green Meanie  
Yes I admit that I made those comments. Are we not allowed to have a negative opinion here? I later supported my claims with visual evidence in a critique and it was conveniently deleted. Those comments were very tame compared to discourse in art history. Everybody with a positive comment didn’t need to provide any visual evidence to support their opinion because derpibooru is a censorshiping hugbox where art discourse is not welcome.
 
Show me a negative, in-depth critical analysis on this site that hasn’t been censored.
 
My comment was removed without even being read. How did the mod know that I ceased the behaviour if he hadn’t even read my comment? He effectively already pre-emptively banned me if I wasn’t able to comment any longer despite the tone or content of my next comment.
 
I think your comment betrays your bias. I was not welcome long before I made the critique because of my unpopular opinions, and thats why my comment was removed when it wasn’t even read. I was banned and silenced because of my conclusion rather than being judged on the strength of my argument. Critique cannot thrive in this environment.
 
That’s fine. If that’s how derpibooru operates, I cannot change that. But you can’t claim that derpibooru is a place that welcomes critiques when it clearly doesn’t. That is a lie.
Wiinajamizzi
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@The Green Meanie  
Lol. I love you, even though I disagree with you.
 
The guy told me to stop. Stop what? He didn’t specify whether to stop commenting in general? Stop being antagonistic? Stop acting so intellectually superior? Stop disliking this artwork? Stop being so devilishly handsome??? It was a vague request at best.
 
I read the mod’s warning and interpreted it as: “stop dishing out heated and negative comments”, so I attempted to make a more formal and toned down response (whilst still being negative) before being zucc’d to all hell! Lmao.
 
Besides, i really don’t mind the time-out or the duck badge. The temporary ban is lifted (so why would I be mad?) and i’ve grown to like the duck badge. My feelings are not hurt by those events. I was only annoyed that my critique was removed even though I spent a lot of time and effort writing it.
 
My contention is that derpibooru is not a place where fair and valid critique, contrary to what Blossomforth may think. In addition, i dislike that it was implied that I received this duck badge because my critiques are unfair or invalid. The fact is I received this awesome badge because I rustled people’s jimmies.
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