Foreshortening/Perspective Advice.

Looking for advice on how I could possibly make this idea look better in terms of foreshortening, perspective and pose makeup.
 

Im not really able to give you any advice, but here’s my version of your WIP, http://imgur.com/a/7zjJL if you wanna get better at setting up perspective/just drawing in general you can watch KNKLs Vids on youtube here: https://www.youtube.com/results?search_query=kienan+lafferty+perspective #98 in particular is very useful for perspective in character drawings IMO.

Thanks so much for the guides, and I wasn’t expecting another artistic example! Your muscle is GREAT! :D

Try the ring approach