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“It’s time for a prey to become a predator” - Aerial Ace
 
Shipping and Descendant Warning :  
Spike X Rarity(Nightmare pony) = Sparity(Daughter)  
Pinkie Pie X ??? = Super Surprise(Descendant)  
(Spifire X Soarin) X (Daring Do X Ahuizotl) = Aerial Ace(Descendant)  
Big Macintosh X Fluttershy = Apple Eden (Descendant)  
Twilight Sparkle X – Top Secret – = Alternate Dawn(Son)  
Applejack X ??? = Little AJ (Daughter)
 
Alternate Dawn Card Collection
 
Warning : This story takes place 100 years after Rarity dead. This story base on season 4. So anything that happened in season 5 will have nothing to do with this story.
 
Warning : This story’s an alternate universe and is really crazy at times. Futa-spell or the magic that can make female pony impregnate another female pony doesn’t exist.
 
Warning : a lot of 4th wall breaking and referencing. Sharing universe with “To Love God - To Love Mortal” but in the future and more crazy(and the crazy will be double by now). You don’t need to read “To Love God - To Love Mortal” to understand this story. It’s just have many Easter egg for that story here.
 
If you confused about chronology of this story, You can watch this timeline to help you  
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English Editor : “dracoblair”:dracoblair.deviantart.com/

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Vexd

Every anime and video game reference gang banged together with the subtlety of a hardron collider. This is starting to hurt
ShimmeringStallion

@gorkspewdium  
I dunno; Vav’s gotten away with a LOT of stuff not being questioned, to the point where it’s less of a “mountain” and more of its own occupied planet under his name, filled with problems that have developed sentient intelligence, to create jobs, families, create food…
 
… anyway…
 
In one of the previous pages during this fight, about a quarter to a third of the entire page is dedicated to explaining the “charm” that Little AJ has. I just don’t see why there wouldn’t be something similar for something like this. Even if it’s explained later, it’s one of those situations where everyone aside from a select few, would likely treat it as normal, being a part of “Crazy Future”.
gorkspewdium

@ShimmeringStallion  
Funny you should mention explanations: it’s one thing when you have background characters spelling out moves/powerups/whatever whilst the main brawl rages, but the participants themselves stopping to blow hot air about this technique or that? Heinous speedbump in my book. If the fight’s that pitched, neither party should have enough breath for that crap unless it’s an utter You Suck Speech(C)-enabling curbstomp.
 
As for this particular example of Wacky Essence-Weapon Distillation(R), I’d give it a pass mainly due to this ‘verse’s high level of ambient madness.
ShimmeringStallion

@gorkspewdium  
Padded-Out isn’t as bad when things can be explained throughout the course of it being padded out.
 
Here, we’re in the middle of a three-page section that goes totally unexplained, and is solely meant to “close” the fight.
 
It’s a cop-out, at the worst possible time. “Now Ace is a sword, but could also be other things.”
 
 
@vavacung  
And as for YOU, where’s the description for this image!?
Dirty Bit
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That's him, officer
This does make me think of Soul Eater, but thanks to some of the source’s comments, I think of Norigami as well.
ShimmeringStallion

Thank goodness this battle-scene is almost over… and hopefully we won’t get another for a very, very long time… or at least until Vavacung gains several editors, or at least some individuals who can look at the story and go “… really? This is what you’re going with?”
gorkspewdium

@GekkanShounen  
Well, it did bust out the Alien(C) jaw & a bunch of blade-tendrils several pages back, but those are more along the lines of natural weaponry. For that matter, we never see Fluffy damage/threaten anything prior to the fight-this might be a case of misunderstanding & self-defense.