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I played a lot of Yu-Gi-Oh, but not MTG so much (just getting into it really). with that said, I’m not sure if this is balanced or not.
 
Tell me what YOU think. Overpowered, Underpowered, feels like a red card, it’s perfect the way it is, your hot sisters number. Tell me anything. ;D

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BlueYoshi
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Luna is best pony
How about this:
 
Luna, Moonlight Warrior 5UU  
5/5  
Flying, Flash, Shroud
 
Whenever Luna, Moonlight Warrior deals combat damage to a player, that player puts the top fifteen cards of his or her library into his or her graveyard.
 
This is a powerful card that can mill your opponent quickly unless your opponent has a creature with flying that can block Luna (Luna doesn’t have trample, so a small 1/1 flyer can stop it), or your opponent has a spell that can shuffle graveyards into decks. Of course, that doesn’t mean that those counters will work against Luna 100% of the time. The player can also use spells to bounce anything that gets in Luna’s way.
CrossingOverFIM

@Background Pony #935B  
Thank you :D
 
It seem like everyone is against intimidate. (T-T) I only throw it on ’cause she looks intimidating and to make it feel a little black. I seem to be too much. XD
 
The Protection come Idea of working for and against Celestia. Black ‘cause that what Tia would most likely fight against and Red ‘cause that’s what Celestia would fight with. I could’ve chosen white over red but having protection from white and black feel odd, I think.
 
Yes, the manipulation of time counters do feel blue I think ;D and, I also think, If any card would have both flash and suspend, it would be blue.
Background Pony #6D20
I’d say take off the intimidate, since that’s not blue at all. Protection from black doesn’t fit Luna, and it doesn’t fit blue very well either (WU gets a protection from all, URG gets protection from white and black, but monoblue only gets protection from red or green). Flash and suspend is a really weird combination. The manipulation of time counters feels really blue, and I like it.
CrossingOverFIM

@Bardic_Knowledge  
OMG Thank You!
 
I used http://www.mtgcardmaker.com/ for this. It was WAY too limiting for my taste- and hopefully everyone’s taste. Thank you for this.
 
https://derpiboo.ru/416003?scope=scpe180ab14db19330ddf3b5e0bfe78576a2e6a7ff80  
I saw this card yesterday and just jumped in XD
 
I wanted this card to feel black without it being black, maybe I went too fair? Also I think this card, in particular, would have some black hate. I mean, it’s Princess Luna. She was forced in/on moon for a 1000 years because of a black card. Well, I’m pretty sure Nightmare Moon would count as a black card anyway.
 
But, just to say it, I wanted this card to work for and against Celestia. Thats why the red/black hate is there.
 
I think I was thinking too much making this card…
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@Bardic_Knowledge  
It’s not the black hate that bothers me as much as the combined black and red hate. That’s something that’s never been seen outside of white. Not to say it can’t be done in blue, but it needs to be part of a larger cycle to avoid breaking symmetry. It could be a full five-color deal, or it could be as simple as a second blue card that’s opposed to green and white. (Actually, Nightmare Moon would be perfect for that second card.)
CrossingOverFIM

@huebris  
lol maybe I am throwing too much on Luna. I kinda wanted her to be broken… just not TOO broken.
 
Just because their aren’t any cards with it doesn’t mean It can’t work. I like them together meanly ‘cause they are the opposites. I give more control to the player and makes the card useful both early and late game. If any Color should have it I think it’s blue.
 
I did it for the pic as well. Sure, it’s showing her going somewhere, but who knows where. She could be attacking her enemy in the pic. Luna certainly looks quite angry here. I thought having both add to it.
 
And I guess you’re right about indestructible. I wanted something hard to kill, and what’s harder then indestructible. XP And I do know about shroud. I, personally, would fight 100 indestructible over a shroud enemy(not really but you know). Maybe it’s just me but shroud and hexproof creatures…
 
I will say I’m new to MTG (only 2-ish weeks in) so maybe I just had bad luck with them.
huebris

@CrossingOverFIM  
i don’t believe there are any actual cards with both flash and suspend, since they’re complete opposites. suspend is more flavorful for this card, like the time it takes the moon to rise, hence the card name ‘Moonlit Warrior’ as opposed to flash which implies it can happen at any time.
 
maybe if it was Luna, Narcolepsy Warrior flash would be ok.
 
i think you’re overloading the card. shroud is very hard to deal with, and combined with trample and flying it may as well be unstoppable for most colors.
 
indestructible doesn’t really fit monoblue, that’s not the color of big unstoppable creatures.
Bardic_Knowledge
The End wasn't The End - Found a new home after the great exodus of 2012

Temporal Physicist
I think you need Magic Set Editor 2. It will help you make cards properly.
 
Also, intimidate and protection are not Blue abilities. Protection is very White, and Intimidate are pretty heavily Red and Black (and sometimes Green).
 
Also, as Black is an Allied colour of Blue, which means that there aren’t many Blue cards with Black Hate.
CrossingOverFIM

@huebris  
I really only put intimidate on ‘cause of dat face. XD Getting rid of it isn’t that big a deal for me but losing indestructible and intimidate feels wrong.
 
Maybe flying, intimidate, trample, shroud, and flash? I think trample and intimidate might clash however.
 
I really want both flash and suspend, makes it feel more bule-ish. maybe…
CrossingOverFIM

@dsagent  
I made the keywords and abilities based on what the pic was telling me.
 
She’s angry, ready to fight. flying through the night to get where she can do that. I wanted her abilities to reflect this.
 
And about the dream ability Luna has, I’m gonna use that on another card she is staring in. I’m not sure how but your tips below is already helping a bit.
dsagent
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The Good Hunter
Also I feel like Luna would be black / blue muticolor.
 
Giving her protection from black is not really that flavourful since she has trouble fighting other creatures of darkness like tirek.
 
Also since she can go into dreams she would have access to a bit of hand destruction or milling. Since in magic entering someone’s mind causes them to do that apparently.
 
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