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rautamiekka
Lunar Supporter - Helped forge New Lunar Republic's freedom in the face of the Solar Empire's oppressive tyrannical regime (April Fools 2023).
King Sombra - Celebrated the 10th anniversary of The Crystal Empire!
Elements of Harmony - Had an OC in the 2022 Community Collab
Magical Inkwell - Wrote MLP fanfiction consisting of at least around 1.5k words, and has a verified link to the platform of their choice
Speaking Fancy - Badge given to members that help with translations
Cool Crow - "Caw!" An awesome tagger
Magnificent Metadata Maniac - #1 Assistant
Preenhub - We all know what you were up to this evening~
Twinkling Balloon - Took part in the 2021 community collab.
My Little Pony - 1992 Edition

Looks good, happy to commission, and there’s more where that came from :D 🤗
It’s a shame Wintera’s coat color (or maybe the shading ? Only now realized that) is conflicting so hard with her eyelid color, need to remember that for the future.
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1) Wintera Cocoa is a female deer-pony adopted by The Coco Clan.
1.1) WIP: Whether she was abandoned & why she was abandoned, and how she was found
1.2) She has a form of the mutation that the Clan has, which is why she is considered a Full Clanmember, the same as a pony born into the Clan.
1.2.1) WIP: Whether she’s sapient like a normal pony, her abandonment story will directly dictate both that & whether she is a Clan pet instead. If she ain’t sapient, she’ll be a Honorary Clanmember instead, since a lower animal can’t be expected to obey the law equally well.
1.3) She’s given a full name like any pony in any case.
1.4) WIP: Canonically she should be the same age as Strawberry Cocoa. In this piece she’s a 14yo teen filly.
2) “Pink Strawberry” (WIP name, but I like it) is canonically a 16yo teen colt, the last sibling of Strawberry Cocoa, and the only canonically male one. In this piece he’s a CMC-age colt.
2.1) WIP: How bad (and realistic) “PS” has his loneliness & insecurity problems.
3) Since her monster power is the temperature regulation of her collar at will, which is a very niche one, especially since deer-ponies are warmer than ponies (IRL deer are a lot warmer, so I imagine a deer-pony also is), she understandably likes when someone enjoys it.
4) Wintera visits the family often and babysits him (definitely his problems being a factor) cuz she can use her monster power along with the fluffy collar to keep him cozy while otherwise keeping him company. Especially useful if no one else is available.
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