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1: me researching how Adam talk was interesting and a bit confusing because idk when to really use the word thou like Luna in “Luna eclipsed” or in a song called “who knows when the sun will rise again” (a good song by the way) i wanted to use early modern English but it was around 1600’s and Adam was around the 1700’s so i had to use how Luna did as best as i could and i think i did well
 
2: realistically in the world of equestria Adam would have different colored body parts because what are the chances victor would find the same colored body parts so Adam would have a cute mark but two different ones so i don’t think he can get a cute mark of his own even if somehow his DNA turned into his very own (which not currently it will be someday) besides the cute marks represent that he is made from science and he is smart so at some point ti will show how fast he learns actually
 
3: Adam does understand and does feel sorry because he actually has a good heart and also he did similar bad things too so ya, griffin and Matthew felt the same way with Adams story too
 
4: yes it seems this was all for noting but Adam will be a big help because him having a kind heart he can be more trustful in others eyes so they won’t be scared and what Adam said why he won’t do it makes sense and also this will help Matthew do something that would put his talent to good use

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Mr100dragon100
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reformation is the best
@Cosmas-the-Explorer
well idk in the original story i thought adam use words like this because (i don’t know about how it went) but Adam used the word “thy” (thy meaning your) in the story and the closest i got to an example was luna in luna eclipsed and how she spoke so i went with that.
and as for this universe, maybe luna was banished during an older time before the 1700s so maybe this is why luna spoke this way
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Explorer in Training
I will say that I think by the late 1700s people spoke more like modern folks with saying you. Although for poets, translations of the Iliad or Odyssey, or preachers especially those with the older King James Bible, they would probably use thou.
Maybe Adam here is more archaic.
Or it could just be in this universe thou and ye were used longer
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Mr100dragon100
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reformation is the best
@redweasel  
I can understand and sympathise because it was not his fault and very understandable why I can feel sympathy for him and he later showed he gated what he’s done the point of the story is self redemption and making your self a batter person
 
For me it’s not hard to sympathise with him since he was in a way a new born baby being abandoned he is naturally good but due to what he went through he did the things he did for me it’s easy to understand and feel sympathy for him, and him going to be a better person will help him too, sometimes you got to forget about the past and if someone is willing (with or without knowing), has changed or wants to change it shows they want to be good.
 
Most of the characters can understand and would sympathise with the main characters but of course not all characters which is why someday I will show them proving their worth
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I think it’s possible to pity frankenstein’s monster, and to understand why he did what he did, but to sympathize with anyone who murders out of rage is pretty challenging even for me to do. at least hyde had the excuse that he was under a lot of pressure. and drugs, lots of drugs. this guy, just… did something really uncool. though to his credit, he did retreat from civilization after that, seeing himself as a danger.