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It’s my first posted submission
I know it’s bad…so please give me every constructive suggestions you can think of.
I know it’s bad…so please give me every constructive suggestions you can think of.
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I don’t usually draw the body part,so I think maybe it’s because of my lack of practise(lol)
Thanks for the suggestions!
Linework is pretty good, shapes are looking smooth and have volume, also good color choice, however:
Forelegs are looking weird. For left one (in chars perspective) it would be better if you extend lines in the body, because foreleg is connected at shoulder, which is located higher. Also I think that right foreleg would look better if it were drawn less curved, just like the left one. But main conserns are with spine, the way you drew it makes it look too short. You can fix it by removing curve at neck. Also belly need to curve upward to thigh instead of down. It makes hind leg look really weird, and it needs little tweaks too. I painted over things that in my opinion are need fixing to make it more descriptive: