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It might seem strange, but the next few pages are actually the first ones that I came up with when I started this comic. I had a big scene in mind that was essentially the core story for my comic and thus belonged near to the middle, but I wasn’t quite sure how I wanted to start or end it. All I need to to now is to figure out how to draw everything to fit in with the a script that’s more suited to a fanfic than a comic.
 
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Background Pony #5EBC
“We’re breaking established canon!?”
 
Lady, you were breaking it when
 
A. the design of Luna is different  
B. Celestia is now an evil empress  
C. Pinkie has a demonic entity speak with her on occasions  
And D. CENSOR BARS APPEARING ALL OVER THEIR GODDAMN IIIII!
 
Wait…why did IIIII get censored? OH IIII, its coming for ME!!!
redweasel
Duck - "someone befriended them, saved them, coaxed them out of their shell, and showed them that sex is nothing to be afraid of. I’m kind of envious of that rape victim"

Fuzzbutt
I’m not gonna donate just to get a drawing of a big black censor bar!
 
we all saw her changing shape
 
and this is why unruly mobs shouldn’t attempt to perform a police investigation
 
even if it was true… starswirl’s world mirrors
 
it certainly would explain why nopony can find the foals, but it entirely lacks a motive.
 
how did she know about the mirrors
 
because she is a rabidly devoted fan of starswirl the bearded who knows everything about him down to what toothbrush he used, and isn’t the brain damaged moron that the eqg movie made her.
 
rainbow dash is straight
 
lies! lies and trickery!
 
a little different from things we got taught
 
schools in ponyville sensibly teach about how life was created by divine providence of their wise sun goddess, and also about those whackos who think life was created when meat just randomly fell together, but canterlot refuses to teach the controversy.
 
sex scenes in the saddle arabia edition  
when you meet her in person next season
 
o lawd
 
< ( I didn’t write those! those were added illegally by some pervert! )
 
( so you mean I bought all this bondage gear for nothing?? ) >
 
< ( w-well I didn’t say that… )
 
I love your universe, by the way