@redweasel  
And thank you for the awesome criticism of this rather “cringey” vodka induced cancer that my Ivan brain hath made. I take back what I said about the psychologist or expert stuff. I mean, what can you expect from a guy hammered via peach vodka. Nkt that I’ve ever gone through the generic childhood abandonment issues i put some characters thru. I even stated in other comments that half of the stuff I did was super cheesy and generic to the point of being cringy.
 
Other than that, I’m glad that you feel flattered by my respect and thoughts of your criticism. I agree a great deal to what you pointed out as both either flaws or problems within either the narrative or story.
 
You’re knowledge on subjects and arts is refreshing to me. I was starting to feel somewhat retarded when all I was getting were positive if not repetitive comments and pleas for more. I needed some strong and solid criticism and reflection of this stuff, which you and others bring like no other art site.
 
I am trully thankful for this commentary and hope that I continue to see your words and criticisms across any art of mine in the future. Thanks!!

@BigOnionbean
 
what? no it’s really common that artists have trouble with their egos, especially writing stories! I don’t have to be a clinical psychologist to point that out!
 
didn’t mean to make it look like I knew enough to claim this stuff. I meant it like “redweasel’s comments on derpibooru are the sort of thing a total lunatic would say,” not “I know redweasel is a total lunatic.”
 
I’m flattered you would think me totally incompetent at judging others, yet somehow an expert on criticizing artwork. at least I’m good at something! I don’t think you have abandonment issues, I don’t even know you. all I know is if I spent my childhood neglected and unloved, I’d probably make a story like this. n-not that I ever m-made a story about everypony surrounding a little kid with care and affection or anything. n-nope, not me.
 
anyway, thanks for organizing this thing, vodka stupor or not.

@redweasel  
I know, which was why I said that I both welcomed criticism of this stuff and said that this wasn’t any soul project of mine. It was what happens when I get wasted and just feel like writing something and wiring money to somebody to draw no matter how ludicrous it may seem. It was never meant to grow to the size it is now, neither was it gonna be a masterpiece of meaning or messages. Lest I find anything positive that too much alcohol provides.
 
While I do appreciate the excellent and constructive criticism of the content itself, this does not however make you a psychologist or a mental expert, able to determine what one thinks when they do something. Therefore I’m gonna have to call bs and somewhat hypocrisy on some of the ego and behavioural accusations you snuck into your otherwise solid critique. Unless I see credentials that show you’re licensed to give mental and behavioral information I suggest you stick to criticizing the art and not the commissioner, lest you step out of your field of expertise for farce judgements that may not be sound.
 
Other than that, thanks for the criticism and advice regarding content. A lot of these imperfections are big enough to where even I cringe at said content more than I find satisfaction or sexual pleasure through it (which you also indicated and suggested, which I’ll solve by denying any such satisfaction).
 
I’m not looking to be the best story writer or artist etc.
 
All I gotta say is that this is what I got, and I’m thankful for your criticism of this content. Maybe in my next vodka stupor I’ll actually put out a script that is somewhat par to some of these basic expectations.
 
Thanks again for the criticism.

@BigOnionbean
 
I’ll be honest with you… this whole comic is awesome overall, but some things make it kind of cringey. I have nothing but respect of someone who wants to pull a project like this together. but they say that the best artists have overcome their own ego, and I think you might still have some personal issues to work out.
 

@Phantom Rider  
Last time I recall, it was roughly two bottles and a bowl of cereal as well, along with everything else.

@BigOnionbean  
How much vodka went into putting that message on all of these? :p
 
It should be interesting to see wherever you decide to take it. You’ve got more than you think on your hands here!

To those that are looking at this thinking “WTF”, I apologize for this acid trip on paper.
 
When I came up with this, this was the result of a couple bottles of Grey Goose Vodka, very lewd/sexual anime, a binging of dbz seasons 8 and 9, the horror movie “The Thing” (the shitty 2011 prequel), holiday pay, a few YouTube vids of plastic models melting via flames, and a “why the hell not” attitude.
 
Results…..The kind of thing you’d only have if you had either a first person lewd/trippy dream or a pure moment full of the essence of “WTF”.
 
TBH, I didn’t expect this thing to get out of control and expand as far as it has. I didn’t even really put any thought into this whole thing (with the exception of being under the influence of alcohol, anime, or mlp) After the first comic was posted, I thought that would be it. Then I started getting questions, ideas, and even donations from randoms requesting that I expand this universe or “Fuseverse” as far as I could.
 
Now 7 comics into this and multiple commissions later, I am both surprised, cringing, and wowed at the fact that randoms still want to see more of this universe, though at this point I got nothing left. Kinda braindead (and out of Vodka) to do anything else, for now.
 
If you all have any questions or ideas as to where this story can go, then I’m all ears. Criticism is also helpful, but I wish you luck cause not even I remembered exactly why the hell I did this in my drunken