Though, not to nitpick too much, but Umi’s a bit more than just ‘big’! Maybe next time include some stuff from a character’s backstory? It’ll make your work pop even more! Before you know it, people will flock to ya, once you expand your subject matter!
Sweet fanart! I’m always happy when someone decides to spend their valuable time drawing any of my OCs. It really means a lot to me, and you’re showing improvement with every picture you do!