#1437759 - semi-grimdark, artist:anxiouslilnerd, oc, oc only, oc:arrow the tiger, pony, unicorn, bracelet, crying, ear piercing, earring, french, jewelry, misspelling, necklace, piercing, self harm, sketch, solo, sorry, traditional art, vent art

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ArrowTheTiger

Inactive af

@GreyGears
thank you.
for things like this, i usually go by memory of how they taught me in school, but then again, my school was crappy at teaching french

I’ll remember your proper translation when i write again

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GreyGears

Virtually real pony.

Always nice to see people trying some French, not the easiest language to be honest :
“Je déteste mon vie” => vie is feminine, you need to use “ma” instead of “mon”
“Je n’avoir une purpose” => “n’” alone isn’t enough for a negation and purpose isn’t French : “Je n’ai aucune raison d’être”
“disolé” => “désolé”
“Je ne veux pas mon vie” => Need to rework this one a bit, something like “Je ne veux plus de cette vie”
Using “Je” repeatedly is also a bit weird, but that depend how you write this character.

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