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Commision for :icongamerspax:
 
The Flim Flam Brothers came by Carousel Boutique and offer to buy the place and brand from Rarity, but she refuses and says she would never give up her dress making business, especially not her first shop in Ponyville. Flam says that she better be sure because various circumstances might eventually happen that causes her to change her mind. Rarity questions if that was a threat, and then Flim jumps in to insist that it isn’t at all and that his brother is just referencing a similar incident that happened to one of their businesses before. With that said, they leave. However, Rarity’s sister, Sweetie Belle as well as her dragon boyfriend, Spike who have overheard the brothers feel like they are up to something, especially based on their previous scams. Spike who previously had a crush on Rarity and still cares for her deeply as family isn’t about to let her be taken advantage of, and Sweetie refuses to let anyone bring harm to her older sister or anyone of her friends or family. With this, the two leave the boutique to track down the Flim Flam brothers and find their wagon. They look around and make sure they are not around and they JUST see them leave the wagon and head off to a different location. After a minute passes and they see them walk far enough away, the couple goes into the wagon to see if they can find anything to tell them if the Flim Flam Brothers are planning anything for the Carousal Boutique. Spike eventually comes across some plans that show they plan to start what seems like an accidental fire with Rarity still inside so to not deal with any legal issues with her, and they then plan to turn the area into a fancy shopping center filled with the brothers’ own brand of custom clothing stores as well as a dining area, movie theater, and all kinds of other stores. Sweetie grabs the plans and they quickly head out the wagon, but once they open the door, the Flim Flam Brothers are standing right in front of them. Flim sees the papers in Sweetie’s hand and the two brothers force Spike and Sweetie back into the wagon and quickly restrain and tie them up. Spike is a lot stronger and gives the brothers some trouble, but Flam quickly gets some chloroform and it passes Spike out, and the same is also done to Sweetie.
 
Both Spike and Sweetie wake up and are unable to move. Sweetie’s arms and legs are both rope bound and Spike can’t even speak as his mouth is tied to prevent him from using his fire breath, and he also has mittens on his claws so he can’t use them to break the ropes, and there’s a rubber ball on his tail to prevent him from using it to cut the ropes or as a weapon as well. As they look around, they are outside and as they look to their sides, they see that they are tied to some train tracks. The Flim Flam brothers have just left this couple out in the middle of nowhere on a train track to die. While Sweetie Belle’s legs are just tied together, Spike’s are tied to the plank of the train tracks he is tied to due to his dragon strength so to make it harder for him to escape. All of a sudden, Sweetie and Spike hear a train coming. Sweetie tries to yell for help, but it’s no good as no one is around. Spike desperately tries to escape and as he struggles, the ropes keeping his legs to the tracks begin to come loose, but the train is fast approaching.
 
Will the Flim Flam Brothers get away with their evil plan and will Spike and Sweetie Belle be flattened to death?
 
Hope u like it :D (Big Grin)

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Background Pony #BD4F
Gordon: The Flim-Flam brothers must not get away with this!
James: We’ll stop their trickery with a whoosh and a wheesh!
Toby: They won’t get away with this! What they’re doing is wrong!
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@Background Pony #AD3C  
I wouldn’t be surprised if most people didn’t read it; at least I didn’t. It’s just fun taking about the image without the story.
 
Actually, how about we have story-discussion on the deviantART page where the story is available? ^^
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How many of you guys actually read the story for this on deviant art. it makes more sense if you’ve read it.
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My Little Pony - 1992 Edition

I do like how the villain disarmed Spike before tying him up. Tied his muzzle shut to keep him from gnawing through the ropes, put mittens over his claws to keep him from ripping free, even put a knob on his tail to render it useless.
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Still a noob
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Don’t worry guys! I’ll save you!
 
pulls out giant scissors and cuts them free